How to Improve Impact of Business Correspondence
A senior recruiter says “If I have two candidates in front of me, equally qualified except that one can write better, I’ll hire the one who can write better – every time.”
Another renowned Communication Skills Expert says, “You can have the greatest ideas in the world, but they’re no good to anyone, if you can’t express them clearly & persuasively.”
As per John Balder & Richard Grinder: Ultimately the most important thing is that the meaning of your presentation is the response you get.
Good English writing skills are important. They help us make sure that what we write gives correct impression and is accurate and clear. Following ten-point guide can help us write well and get the response we want every time.
Make a Plan (20:60:20 Formula)
Time spent planning what to write is never wasted. Planning helps you to focus on what you want to write so that you can organize your ideas and structure logically and clearly. A plan helps you to stay focused and relevant – and ultimately, saves time. We should spend 20% of the time to plan the message we want to convey, 60% time actually writing & 20% time revising what has been written. No mail should ever be sent without revising 2/3 times.
Say Why You Are Writing in the First Sentence
Tell your reader why you are writing in the first sentence itself. Use phrases such as “I am writing to enquire about…” or “We have been experiencing some technical problems with…” If you’re replying to someone, you can write “Thank you for your letter / email.”
Keep It Short and Simple (KISS)
Reader should not be made to wade through long, rambling sentences. Write concisely and clearly and use a simple sentence structure. Avoid using over-formal words such as “hereby” and “herewith”. They will make you sound old-fashioned. Stick to your plan and only include relevant and necessary information.
Link Your Ideas
Guide your reader through your text by using linking words and phrases. Words such as “and”, “because”,”therefore“etc. Make your text flow and prevent your sentences from appearing isolated from each other.
Get the Tone Right
The tone of your text depends on who you are writing to, and why you are writing. If you are answering a colleague’s email, your tone will be friendly and helpful. If you are writing a letter of apology to a customer, you tone should be polite and impersonal. Even if you are angry about something, use professional tone.
Getting the tone right also means thinking from your reader’s point of view. For example, using “you should” instead of “perhaps you could” to seniors makes tone over-direct. Similarly, giving bad news without introducing it first with phrase such as “unfortunately” or “We are sorry, but…” reader might assume that we don’t care. Thinking about the impact your writing has will help you to choose the right tone and avoid giving the wrong impression.
Keep Your Style Appropriate and Consistent
When you write, bear in mind the formality of the situation. Writing to a friend is very different from writing to your seniors. There are a number of factors which determine style, such as vocabulary choice, length and complexity of sentence and so on. When in doubt, the safest course of action is to choose a neutral style to avoid sounding either too formal or too informal.
End Your Correspondence by Referring Back to the Reader
Make sure your reader knows what the next step should be. If you are asking for help in an email, you could end “Thanks for your help”. In a letter you could write “I look forward to hearing from you.” If you are replying to an enquiry, you could end the email or letter with “Please do not hesitate to contact me if you would like further information”. You could also end your correspondence by referring forward to a meeting, such as: “I look forward to meeting you next Thursday” or in an email “See you next week” or by asking the reader to do something, such as ”Please sign and return the enclosed by the end of next week.”
Make Sure Your Salutation and Ending are Correct
This is probably the simplest thing to get right & you must get it right. If you start your letter with “Dear Mr. X” or “Dear Ms X”, end “Yours sincerely”. If you know your reader quite well, you can start “Dear + first name” and end with “Best wishes” or “Best / Kind regards”. Take care never to use Mr. or Ms. With anybody’s first name. Always use Mr. or Ms. with only last name of the person you are writing to. Avoid using Mrs. before name of a woman unless you know that she is marrid & she prefers to be addressed thus. Prefer using Ms as title for a woman. If you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to and start “Dear Sir or Madam”, end with “Yours faithfully” rather than “Yours sincerely”. You can also start and end emails in the same way as letters. But if you are writing to more than one person, you can omit the salutation completely and start with your objective. Other ways you can end emails is by writing “Thanks” or even “Cheers”, but never “Bye”.
Pay Attention to Your Punctuation
Most common punctuation mistakes are made with capital letters, commas and apostrophes. Remember that commas are used in lists, and to separate clauses, to give a kind of “breathing space”. Capital letters should be used for proper nouns, and in the first sentence of your correspondence. Apostrophes are used to show possession or contraction, but never for plurals. Pay special attention to marks of punctuation. In correct mark of punctuation can even make complete nonsense of your sentence. For example; comapre ‘Let’s eat, daddy’ with ‘Let’s eat daddy.’
Edit Your Writing
Read through what you have written to check for spelling and grammar mistakes. Some typical grammatical mistakes are article use (a, an, the), tense use and preposition use. However, each person has their own “weak spot” and you should be aware of your own difficulties when you write.
As you read, check also that you have followed your plan and that there is no redundant information. If possible, ask someone else to read your text. It’s sometimes hard to see your own mistakes and a second pair of eyes may pick up something you’ve missed.
Above tips should help you to vastly improve quality of your writing and motivate your reader to comply with your request.
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